Tuesday, April 30, 2013

Endangered Species

            Hello Lynasia Davis here I will be talking about 3 endangered species. One of the endangered species a rhino. People take there horns for money. Another one is giant pandas are facing a new threat the last of there food choice. One more is saving nemo scientist are working to protect the clown fish.

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  1. I love this post the only problem i have is sentences like these 2: One of the endangered species a rhino what u should had said is: One of the endangered species is a rhino, okay now 4 the other sentence is: Another one is giant pandas are facing a new threat the last of there food choice now what u should had said is:Another one is giant pandas are facing a new threat.The new threat is the lost of there food. Okay i hope the info i gave u helps u bye.

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